please tell me what you think....

DooMKitty · 01-13-2005, 12:04 PM

I wrote this poem for yak =^.^=

The Smile

The smile
thinking of you
being with you
in your arms
holding your hand
against your chest
hear you heartbeat
the smile
life lives on
day by day
seeing your face
hearing your words
caressing your skin
feeling your precence
the smile
countless hours
by your side
falling asleep
to the pricess sound
or your breathing
softly drifting past my ear
the smile

Raiyven · 01-14-2005, 07:49 AM

awwwww, thats sweet

i wrote a poem (well, more like an emotionally charged rant) the other day for my sun and stars when i hadn't seen her for a whole entire day

love's an incredible thing, for what it can motivate us to do. me, i started painting and modelling again

.......cgi modelling. of architecture. ignore the frilly dancer costume, and NO those aren't castanets. they're cupcake plates.

yak · 01-16-2005, 07:12 PM

just like i told you when i read the poem the first time. it is beautiful, but not nearly as beautiful as you are.

Stang · 01-17-2005, 04:07 PM

yak · 01-18-2005, 04:40 PM

h ah astang, funny but i meant every word of what i said

01-13-2005, 12:04 PM	#1
DooMKitty Registered User Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: In Yaks Butt Posts: 56	please tell me what you think.... I wrote this poem for yak =^.^= The Smile The smile thinking of you being with you in your arms holding your hand against your chest hear you heartbeat the smile life lives on day by day seeing your face hearing your words caressing your skin feeling your precence the smile countless hours by your side falling asleep to the pricess sound or your breathing softly drifting past my ear the smile __________________ People must be stalking me ~~+++i love yak =^.^= +++~~

01-14-2005, 07:49 AM	#2
Raiyven Big Bad Thread Boogeyman Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Burlington, ON. Age: 42 Posts: 406	awwwww, thats sweet i wrote a poem (well, more like an emotionally charged rant) the other day for my sun and stars when i hadn't seen her for a whole entire day love's an incredible thing, for what it can motivate us to do. me, i started painting and modelling again .......cgi modelling. of architecture. ignore the frilly dancer costume, and NO those aren't castanets. they're cupcake plates. __________________ "For in that we are both especially daring and especially thorough in calculating what we attempt, we can truly be distinguished from other men, for whom ignorance is boldness but calculation brings hesitancy. Rightly would they be judged strongest in spirit who recognize both dangers and pleasures with utmost clarity and are on neither count deterred from risks." - Thucydides, The Peloponnesian War: 2.40, "The Funeral Oration of Perikles" (431 BCE)

01-16-2005, 07:12 PM	#3
yak Threadkiller Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: marysville, washington Age: 39 Posts: 537	just like i told you when i read the poem the first time. it is beautiful, but not nearly as beautiful as you are. __________________ One can smile, and smile, and still be a villian.-William Shakespeare Are you trying to tell me that the man who tried to put a rubber fist in my anus was a uhh.. homosexual?-Borat

01-17-2005, 04:07 PM	#4
Stang Team Captain Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Everett, WA, USA Age: 50 Posts: 3,859 Xbox Leaderboard: 1^st	__________________

01-18-2005, 04:40 PM	#5
yak Threadkiller Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: marysville, washington Age: 39 Posts: 537	h ah astang, funny but i meant every word of what i said __________________ One can smile, and smile, and still be a villian.-William Shakespeare Are you trying to tell me that the man who tried to put a rubber fist in my anus was a uhh.. homosexual?-Borat

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