please tell me what you think....

[DooMKitty]

I wrote this poem for yak =^.^=
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The Smile

The smile
thinking of you
being with you
in your arms
holding your hand
against your chest
hear you heartbeat
the smile
life lives on
day by day
seeing your face
hearing your words
caressing your skin
feeling your precence
the smile
countless hours
by your side
falling asleep
to the pricess sound
or your breathing
softly drifting past my ear
the smile

[Raiyven]

awwwww, thats sweet :D
i wrote a poem (well, more like an emotionally charged rant) the other day for my sun and stars when i hadn't seen her for a whole entire day :) love's an incredible thing, for what it can motivate us to do. me, i started painting and modelling again :)
.......cgi modelling. of architecture. ignore the frilly dancer costume, and NO those aren't castanets. they're cupcake plates.

[yak]

just like i told you when i read the poem the first time. it is beautiful, but not nearly as beautiful as you are. :roll:

[Stang]

:barf :lol

[yak]

h ah astang, funny but i meant every word of what i said :imu: